Look at the envelope. Where do they live? (The woods - this was the setting in the story of Goldilocks and the Three Bears)
Where we have met the characters mentioned in the first letter before? (Goldilocks and the Three Bears)
Read the letter in the photo together.
Who do you think wrote it?
Can you remember some of the story events/ the things that happened in the story?
Are any of these story evening mentioned in the letter?
In this story the number 3 comes up a lot. This happens in many fairy tales.
Can you think of things that came in 3s in the story? (bears, chairs, beds, bowls of porridge)
Why do you think she wrote it? (to apologise for breaking the chair, sleeping in the bed and eating the porridge)
Did you notice the P.S. at the end? This stands for post script which means written after. She forgot to include this thought in the letter so added it at the end. Did you know you are allowed to use that in your letters too.
Find each of the following words in the letter and circle them
Check if they are spelled correctly using the Y1 spelling list.
Colour in the ones that are wrong in red and those that are spelled correctly in green.
little | the | I | came |
your | house | girl | she |
he | chair | bear | love |
be | my | there | of |
Read some other letters of apology people have invented from other characters you might know about already.
Complete the worksheet provided. Write or draw pictures in the boxes to plan your letter.
1. Who will your letter be for?
2.What are you sorry for?
3. What could you do to put things right?
4. What else could you do to show you are sorry?
5. How will you end your letter?
6. Is there anything else you want to add/say at the end?
Get your plan from yesterday and the letter writing worksheet for today (or a plain sheet of paper).
Talk your child through the steps below and look at Goldilocks' letter below so they can see how we set it out on the paper.
- Mr, Mrs, Miss, Master and Dr all must start with a capital as it is a title of a person.
(You may have to explain what these titles mean as your child might not have seen Dr written down or realised how to read this aloud)
- First names need a capital letter.
- Middle names need a capital letter (not everyone has a middle name though).
- Last names need a capital letter.
- The names of places like your street needs a capital letter at the start.
- Other places such as villages, towns, cities and countries also need a capital letter.
1. Write their title and name on the top line. These words will need to start with a capital letter.
(Can you remember who your sorry letter was for?)
2. Write the name of their house if they have one on the next line. Does their house have a special name?
(Most houses don't have a special name but some do - look out for this the next time you go for a walk in your local area)
3. Write the number they live at on the next line down.
(What number will your letter be sent to? It might help them make the link between addresses and houses by looking at the number on your front door?)
4.Talk together about your street name. Write it next to the number they live at.
(Show them how it is written with a capital to start each word because it is a name. When you are on your daily walk you might notice street signs - explain to your child that street signs tend to be all in capitals which is not the way we write them down in our address.)
5. Write the name of the place they live. (smallest area first - their house might be in a woodland which is in a village or town, which is in a city, which is in a county, which is in a country?)
6. End with a postcode. It contains letters and numbers. Usually all letters in a postcode are in capitals.
Persuasive features found in the advert |
Words and phrases that make it sound amazing
Words and phrases - reasons to buy
Words and phrases that tell us it is famous/ that it has a good reputation
Words and phrases that tell us about the cost and persuade us to buy it now
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Watch today's input
https://classroom.thenational.academy/lessons/to-listen-to-and-respond-to-a-persuasive-advert-cgv3gd
Watch today's input
https://classroom.thenational.academy/lessons/to-tell-a-persuasive-map-from-memory-6wtp6d
Here is another way you could plan your work.
https://classroom.thenational.academy/lessons/to-box-up-for-purpose-6ru62c?activity=video&step=1
Watch today's input.
https://classroom.thenational.academy/lessons/to-use-the-power-of-3-for-description-6gv62d
Choose some of the adjectives shows in the example or choose some of your own.
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Now write one on the lines yourself.
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Watch today's input.
https://classroom.thenational.academy/lessons/to-write-questions-to-hook-the-reader-chk66d
What | Where | When | Why |
Who | How | Which | Do you know that... |
Have you ever... | Would you like to... |
Watch today's input.
https://classroom.thenational.academy/lessons/to-summarise-key-points-in-an-advert-61gker
We have written a simplified version of the advert shown in the video that you can use to help you.
If you would prefer to listen to/watch an example of a written advert you can use the link below. Please note, there is no need for it to be as long as the example in the video.